Speechless

I cant talk today . Because my allergies my throat hurts so much I just can't talk but I can write. The day is hard because I can't really talk but I can say some things but I have to whisper.

It's not fun my throat hurts so much I'm speechless.

Jwr

5/28/14

Jwr 

Prompt: if you were stranded on a deserted island what charecter form the book would you choose to be with you.

The charecter i would choose is daniel because he is smart and full of ideas he is also very creative. Another reason situar Daniel got his dada notes and he also hid the notes well and took thk on the ship. He also got away from big tom at the cargo port and swam away cause tom can't swim.

I think that dainiel is very creative thoughtful and smart so then we could get off the island together.

 

Ahw

Today I had a band concert. We played so well the songs we played were so good. My favorit song was royal march. I love the clarinet

jwr 1

5/28/14

prompt:Do you think that this book is realistic account to that historical time period? Why or Why not? Provide evidence that support your thinking.

I think that in the book Jump Ship to Freedom the setting and time period is very realistic because the setting contains many wood ships which was how they were back in that time period. They use many wood ship like the mayflower or the pita they were made of wood and they also had many decks and held cabins. most ships like that also had cannons for safety and other reasons.

Another Piece of evidence is that the way they talked a lot differently like "I aint speak like that no more" with funny grammar and how so African Americans such as Daniel talked because of different county how they spoke. It also said that their house was made of wood i can agree because the house he said was on fire and that they had to go for a trick to get the soldiers notes and how Mrs Ivers went outside.        

I think that this evidence fits my prompt because it all shows that it is realistic to the time period and how they spoke and how they acted and how the houses and transportation was like back in the time frame of the story Jump Ship to Freedom.

lit eassy draft

  The character William in short life is always thing that he will die soon because of a bump on his head. My claim for the story Short Life is that William is a bit over reactive and sensitive about the bump on his head.

To prove my claim he says that he has a big bump on his head and thought it was a big tumor. When he was watching TV he saw it said that a quarter back was throwing passes one minute the next thing he died of a tumor.This is evidence from the text on page 80 middle. He thinks that it goes fast but that's how long the tv program.

Another reason for this claim is on the top of page 81 is where he grabs a cigar and throws it up in the air and sees if he can still catch it in the air but then he thinks that he cant do it any more because of the tumor or bump on his head.

My last piece of evidence is when he Goes to tell his mom on page 82 where he goes to his moms room to tell here about his tumor but then she says he has a bumpy head. but he is so sensitive and over reactive because because then he notices a small numbness on his finger so small it should not matter.

The claim that will is over reactive and sensitive is a good supported claim because i think these are some claims the support my idea about will.Will is very sensitive and he can be very thought full over himself because he just thinks a lot and is very sensitive due to small thing that he over reacts to which is good in some ways. This evidence i give fits my claim well because i do think i have a strong claim about wills actions and thoughts. 

Poor dad

Poor dad my dad is stuck in Chicago due to rain and lightning. He says the rain won't stop my lax practice got canceled due to lightning! He says that the flight will leave at 11 or 1 poor dad won't get to see him at all today!!!😢😢😢😢

Awh

Hoi ik bent Tom. Ik kan goet Nederlands spreken nu moet ik an stukje learen. Her is best cel moeluk.

Ahw

Bob was a guy a nice guy he liked to jump. Bob jumped every where. To the store hop hop to the park hop hop and to his house. One day bob jumped in the sewer and got stuck. he had to find a way out he poked a stick at the wall and gave up! He looked around and saw a portal gun he shot through the sewer hole some where and on the ground. Then he hopped in the portal and suffocated in a balloon. 

Moral: don't buy balloons

ahw

my favoriot game on my phone is clash of clans! i love it because you can find and make new friends in the clans you build and make your base strong by upgrading your defenses and troops to conquer everything. i love clash of clans.

Henry the squirrel

Henry was a average everyday squirrel that could talk. No earlyer today he went to buy something's at the store and founnd him self in a butcher shelf where they grind meat.... 

What will he do next

Hatchet

I love my new book hatchet it's amazing it's about a boy who gets stranded in a Canadian wilderness and has to survive with a hachet his mom gave him before he went to  his dads for the summer this book is by Gary Paulson 

Tree climbing

Me and my family went to a camp in the Netherlands there was a giant tree in back yard of our beach house. The guide said it was one of the biggest in the park!

Me and my cousin went to go climb up the tree we went thirty feet up and then crack, a branch on the way down broke me and my cousin had to find another way down we looked for a while!

Lit essay

In the book hachet Brian misses his family and his house. My claim a that Brian is scared that they won't find him and he will die.

ahw

mini the spider
mini was  a spider yes was shes not really there eney more heres how it happened. one day mini was walking to her web a she saw a rat about to eat here eggs so she went to stop it mini took one of her eggs and put it safe i a room where the rats could not get to. mini ran from the rat as mini went to save last child.  mini ran so hard throwing here only egg on the ground and jumping off the shelf the rat went after her leaving the child on the shelf un touched we call this shelf after her minis shelf.

i can fly

bigy is a pig he loves to dream of things that are not even possible. he had a dream that he was a aggent that worked for the goverment, he a had a kit kat bomb at his side ready for battle he fifhts of 20 agents and wakes up with a little kit kat gun what just happend?

Tree climbing

Me and my family went to a camp in the Netherlands there was a giant tree in back yard of our beach house. The guide said it was one of the biggest in the park!

Me and my cousin went to go climb up the tree we went thirty feet up and then crack, a branch on the way down broke me and my cousin had to find another way down we looked for a while!

Ss chapter 11 test

Me: hello today we are here wth Benjamin Franklin and lord dunmore

Benjamin: good day I'm Benjamin Franklin.

Me: are you a patriot or a loyalist.

Benjamin:I am indeed a patriot try to change laws from the king.

Me:and lord dunmore are you a loyalist

Dunmore: why yes I am.